
Script & Manuscript Consultation Services
A one hour (live via zoom or call) consult where I will use my own Story Muse method to help you figure out your story. Depending on where you are, this may be the overarching logline and plot or it might be to help you figure out the main beats of your story. Will include reading material you may provide so I can understand where you are and may include brainstorming to get the basic gist of your story and most of the main beats.
I am a script consultant, Hollywood reader, and writer who recently had an "ah ha" moment about how important character is to story.
There are a lot of courses and script consultants out there, but none of them start with character and this is where I feel there is a disconnect in the industry when it comes to teaching the craft of writing.
Let me help you set up your story for success, starting from the very important foundations of character!
(Other services I offer include book editorial, book self-publishing consultations, retainer book development and publisher outreach services, e-book design and typeface creation, as well as book and script development services).
Thank you! Your notes for the Apu script I wrote were so great. I couldn't have been a finalist without them.
I found Patricia's feedback on my Hitchcock screenplay invaluable. Her notes on story structure, pacing and character arcs helped me to write a far superior draft I entered into multiple screenwriting competitions. The screenplay was an Academy Nicholl Fellowship semifinalist, Austin Film Festival quarterfinalist, and ScreenCraft Drama Competition quarterfinalist and I don't think my screenplay would have competed nearly as well in any of these competitions had it not been for Patricia's feedback and notes.
“In October of (2022), Patricia took over the management of my Kindle Vella Book, Malibu Skies. In this duty, she edited and scheduled the release of chapters, and when needed, crafted engaging cliffhangers over a period of about 4 months. She took on a similar role for my novella, Eden.
Patricia then converted both projects into eBooks. She helped create the layout of the eBooks utilizing Amazon software, Kindle Create. While there were ultimately some formatting challenges due to the software, Patricia brought the eBooks close to publication-ready. With a few minor adjustments, I have no doubt that they can be finalized for publication.
In March of 2023, Patricia edited my Sci-Fi project, A Sacrifice of Blood and Stars for me. She read and edited the book using “track changes” in Word and provided insightful feedback while addressing potential continuity issues”.
Patricia Vettori
store owner
I am a writer and story consultant who has read 100's of screenplays for various boutique production companies in Hollywood. Recently I experienced my own "ah ha" moment around the importance of character in writing. Character is the foundation to any writing. I want to help you set up your story for success starting with character.