The Story Muse

Script & Manuscript Consultation Services

Why Choose Me?

I am a script consultant, Hollywood reader, and writer who recently had an "ah ha" moment about how important character is to story. 

There are a lot of courses and script consultants out there, but none of them start with character and this is where I feel there is a disconnect in the industry when it comes to teaching the craft of writing. 

Let me help you set up your story for success, starting from the very important foundations of character! 

(Other services I offer include book editorial, book self-publishing consultations, retainer book development and publisher outreach services, e-book design and typeface creation, as well as book and script development services). 

Thank you! Your notes for the Apu script I wrote were so great. I couldn't have been a finalist without them.

Rusteen Honardoost
writer/script coordinator at Moonbug Entertainment

I found Patricia's feedback on my Hitchcock screenplay invaluable. Her notes on story structure, pacing and character arcs helped me to write a far superior draft I entered into multiple screenwriting competitions. The screenplay was an Academy Nicholl Fellowship semifinalist, Austin Film Festival quarterfinalist, and ScreenCraft Drama Competition quarterfinalist and I don't think my screenplay would have competed nearly as well in any of these competitions had it not been for Patricia's feedback and notes. 

Rob Simpson
screenwriter/Nicholl Fellowship semifinalist

“In October of (2022), Patricia took over the management of my Kindle Vella Book, Malibu Skies. In this duty, she edited and scheduled the release of chapters, and when needed, crafted engaging cliffhangers over a period of about 4 months. She took on a similar role for my novella, Eden.

Patricia then converted both projects into eBooks. She helped create the layout of the eBooks utilizing Amazon software, Kindle Create. While there were ultimately some formatting challenges due to the software, Patricia brought the eBooks close to publication-ready. With a few minor adjustments, I have no doubt that they can be finalized for publication.

In March of 2023, Patricia edited my Sci-Fi project, A Sacrifice of Blood and Stars for me. She read and edited the book using “track changes” in Word and provided insightful feedback while addressing potential continuity issues”.

Jennifer Brody
Star Wars and Disney Chills Author (**this was an upaid mentorship)

About Me

Patricia Vettori

store owner

I am a writer and story consultant who has read 100's of screenplays for various boutique production companies in Hollywood. Recently I experienced my own "ah ha" moment around the importance of character in writing. Character is the foundation to any writing. I want to help you set up your story for success starting with character.  

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